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{January 4, 2016}   The Leaf and the Feather

leaf and feather

Uncommon Fellows

I took this picture recently — it was not one of my best, but it inspired me to write a little “children’s poem.”


A leaf and a feather

awoke together

On a balmy Christmas Day.

Their conversation

Was their situation

this balmy Christmas Day.

“Something’s not right,”

Claimed the leaf–

Thinking the sweep of the wind

Blew him south in his sleep.

“My friend,” he said, “if I may be so bold,

I’d really much rather

I sleep in the cold

Huddled close with my fellows

As I grow old.”

The feather  agreed

That things were not right,

He was used to the feeling

Of being in flight,

More feathers around him

Raising him up

and up like a kite.

But others like them

Were nowhere in sight,

no one else cared for

what they thought

was their “plight.”

The blacktop around them

Was dark and rough,

And the leaf and the feather saw

Their world as tough.

They knew they must see

themselves as enough.

They must accept change, just be–

Share this space,

find safety and grace,

in each other’s company.

Their talk made them realize

They both felt the same,

And learning to love this,

Was the name of the game.

So that was the way

that balmy Christmas Day

they bonded together,

The leaf and the feather.


v4vikey says:


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sued51 says:

Thank you! 🙂

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That is sweet and I like it..

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love the poem!

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sued51 says:

Thank you LMA! 🙂


Deb says:

This is fabulous…I so love this!!! How very clever and creative of you…sincerely this is outstanding!!!

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sued51 says:

Thank you so much, Deb! So glad you liked it…:-)

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Deb says:

I really, really did!! 🙂


[…] This last photo inspired me to write a “children’s rhyme” on my other blog… […]


Deb says:

This is fabulous! Such a fun story within a poem, I love it!!

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